The Haunted house
The characters are Luna, Elijah, Bercal, Galila, and Sabrina.
Chapter 1 - Our Plan
It was a dark Halloween night and my friends and
I was planning to go to a haunted house. We were all excited because we knew we weren’t going to be scared. I was scared but I didn’t tell anyone because I didn’t want to feel like a loser. I now regret going anyway.
We were walking past one scary house. We all turned to the house and it started to rain, thunder and lightning all around the house.
Two of my friends, Elijah and Luna said “ We should go check it out,
they said in a joking voice. We all agreed because we were curious about what was in that creepy house.
CHAPTER 2 - The approach
The bravest one Elijah stepped forward and opened the door. There was a creaking noise coming from the door. We all walked in holding each other’s hands. We were very scared because before we went to the “ Haunted neighbourhood” we watched a lot of scary movies. We were all looking at the living area. It was dark, with old furniture and broken tables. We were all freaked out by the living area. Luna, Elijah, Berecal, and Sabrina said “We already started it so we have to finish it. I was so angry at them so I said “ DIDN’T YOU NOTICE IT’S A HAUNTED HOUSE” I shouted. They didn’t listen and they just kept walking. I didn’t want to be alone so I kept walking with them. When we got to the stair’s they were old so when you stepped on it you could hear a creaking sound. We were walking up the stair’s but we stopped because we heard a tapping noise on the door, we all looked at the door and saw a man with long grey hair. We started running but then I discovered that man had a gun and a knife, “I’M GOING TO KILL ALL OF YOU!” he said in a loud angry voice. We all froze with fear. We were all about to run up the stairs again but then I said, “Uh guys the door is unlocked so he can get in!”
Chapter 3 - murder
The man opens the door but by the time he steps in the house and starts looking for us, we were already hiding in the bathroom. The man starting checking the bathrooms so all of us were running downstairs. Luckily the man did not hear us because we were so fast.
After that, we were all freaked out. Then I whispered to Elijah “we have got to go!” But he said, “we have to finish it!” I replied “blah blah blah” I was so angry at him because I didn't want to finish the mission. I wanted to stay safe. Bercal and Sabrina tapped me on the shoulder and said: “Look! There are dead body’s of girls and boys hanging in the fridge”. When I saw it I froze in fear. Then we all heard the creaks on the stairs. I whispered, “the man is coming, run for your life”. We quickly ran to the back door and hid in the cupboard (luckily the man did not hear us).
Chapter 4 - The big storm
After 5 minutes of hiding, Elijah said, “let's find a gun or something to kill this man”. I agreed because this man was trying to find us and we needed to stop him. But then I was so scared when he said, “Elijah, Luna,
Sabrina, Galila, Bercal I am looking for you”. We all froze in fear.
We tried to find a way to get out of the haunted house but all the
back doors were locked. I remembered that the front door was open.
So I told everyone but they weren’t listening they were too focused on
killing the man. Then the big storm came. Thunder and lightning were surrounding the house again. The man was laughing, but it was not a normal laugh it was an evil cackle. After that, I took a peek at the man,
and he turned into a monster. The man had gray skin, black eyes, long fingernails and sharp yellow teeth.
Chapter 5 - The death attempt
The monster man saw me and started running for all of us because he
knew that I was not alone. But since he was old he couldn't catch up.
We then hid in a bathroom and there was blood dripping down the water faucet. We were scared to the point Sabrina said “ I going to pee my
pants, but she didn’t use the toilet, because she was scared that something was going to pop out, (luckily she didn’t pee her pants). My friends
and I were sitting in the bathroom until…
Chapter 6 - The risk
Elijah said, “right I will distract the man, Sabrina go find a gun or something to kill him, Bercal go find something to cover his mouth and Galila go find a chair that's not broken for him to sit on”. We all went in different directions. When he saw Elijah I ran so fast so he would not see me. When
Elijah stopped at a room I already put the chair in the room,
and the man was so tired from running so he sat down.
After that, Bercal snuck into the room and went behind the chair and covered his mouth and tightly tied his arms to the chair.
After that Sabrina came into the room with a gun and shot the
man dead. After that, we all cheered, “ WE DID IT!”. Afterwards,
we stopped by a shop and bought some snacks to eat to celebrate.
We took them back to my place, we went into my bedroom
and watched scary movies and ate all the snacks.
The End
By Galila
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